How does this chapter sound so far?

There aren't rich and poor sides of Ohio. There are the metropolis areas (Dayton, Cleveland, Cincinnati, Columbus, and some say Akron) and then the "hillbilly" (not trying to be offensive) areas, were people grown a lot of soy beans and corn. And no ones says shall. Its okay, not really getting plot, chapter is a little short, you should probably get this checked.