Sunday, August 14, 2011
Please tell me if you like my poem?
you are very talented,if you are asking me what i think I will provide you with what I think may need a little tweeking:reflections like the blue ski in a clear running spring only seen from the skis above til I am fulfilled....Leave out poetry pouring out of my pores its alitlle much..From the unborn pinl sky....how about from the morning sun rising slips away leave out, my eyes....Strongest stands string together to stay...its sounds like a Dr.Sweuss book.think!!!! ....what on this earth as tall as mountains or as strong as the sea is it like???
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